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2.´Éµ¿ÇüÀ¸·Î ÀÛ¹®Ç϶ó!
¿¹) For a long time the earth was believed to be flat.à For a long time people believed that the earth was flat.
3.µ¿»ç ±¸¹®À» Áñ°Ü »ç¿ëÇ϶ó!
¿¹) Power has a tendency to corrupt.à Power tends to corrupt.
4.¹Ýº¹À» ÇÇÇ϶ó!
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¿¹) People have their strong points as well as their weak ones.
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¿¹) He earns more money in a day than I do in a week.
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¿¹) Heaven certainly looks after the man who takes care of business first.
5.´Ü¾îÀÇ ´µ¾Ó½º¸¦ ±¸ºÐÇ϶ó.
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bump : ³»쫒´Ù(´Ù¼Ò ¼Ó¾îÀûÀΠǥÇö)
6.´ëÀÔ½Ä ÀÛ¹®À» ÇÇÇ϶ó.
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¿¹) He graduated University of the Philippines.(x)
He graduated from University of the Philippines.(o)
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I started a business with empty hands.(x)
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7.Ç¥ÇöÀÇ ±º´õ´õ±â¸¦ Á¦°ÅÇ϶ó!
¿¹) Before I completely finished explaining the various differences between the colleges, he changed his future plans.à Before I finished explaining the differences between the colleges, he changed his plans.
8.±¸µÎÁ¡À» »ç¿ëÇ϶ó!
9.¼ýÀÚ Ç¥±â¹ýÀ» ÀÍÇô¶ó!
10.Àϰü¼ºÀ» À¯ÁöÇ϶ó!
¿¹) She is young, enthusiastic, and she has talent.à She is young, enthusiastic, and talented.


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1.¼­·Ð(Introduction)
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In brief/In short(¿äÄÁ´ë)
In a word(ÇѸ¶µð·Î)
All in all(Àü¹ÝÀûÀ¸·Î)
Finally/Eventually/In the end(°á±¹)
Last but not least(¸¶Áö¸·À¸·Î Áß¿äÇÑ °ÍÀº)
In conclusion/To conclude/Conclusively(°á·ÐÀûÀ¸·Î)

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Changes in the 20th century

Any person who has lived in the twentieth century has seen a lot of changes take place in almost all areas of human existence. Some people are excited by the challenges that these changes offer; others want to return to the simpler life-style of the past. The twentieth century has certain advantages such as a higher standard of living for many, but it also has some disadvantages such as a polluted environment, the depersonalization of human relationships, and the weakening of spiritual values.


(Source: Writing Academic English by Longman)

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Changes in the 20th century

In short, although the twentieth century has indeed given some of us a lot of advantages by making us richer, healthier, and freer to enjoy our lives, it has, in my opinion, not made us wiser. The twentieth century has also made our earth dirtier, our people less humane, and our spiritual lives poorer. We wish to continue to enjoy the benefits of technological advancement because they free us to pursue our other interests and goals. However, we must make a concerted effort to preserve our natural environment for future generations. Moreover, we should take the time now to make our lives more meaningful in our increasingly impersonal, mechanized world.


(Source: Writing Academic English by Longman)

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83 University  ¹Ì±¹ ¸í¹®´ë, Áö¿øÀ² ´Ã°í ÇÕ°ÝÀ² ÁÙ¾ú´Ù.  [1]  BOF 2007/05/31 143 2467
82 University  2007 AP ÃÑÁ¤¸®  [1]  BOF 2007/05/31 152 1646
81 University  ²ÞÀÇ ¾ÆÀ̺ñ ¸®±× ÃÖ±Ù µ¿Çâ  [2]  BOF 2007/04/20 159 1580
80 University  ÇϹöµå ´ëÇÐ ÀԽà Áö¿ø¼­ ºÐ¼®À» ÅëÇØ ¿Ïº®ÇÑ ¸í¹®´ë ÁغñÀÇ ±æÀ» ã´Â´Ù  [2]  BOF 2007/04/14 164 1676
79 University  ´ëÇÐ ÀÔÇлçÁ¤°ü½Ç¿¡¼­´Â ¾î¶² ÀÏÀÌ ¹ú¾îÁö³ª    BOF 2007/04/14 381 1940
78 ÀÏ¹Ý  ÇϹöµå ½ºÅ¸ÀÏ·Î °øºÎÇÏ±â  [1]  BOF 2007/04/09 146 1885
77 University  ¹Ì±¹ Ä®¸®Áöº¸µå AP ÇÕ°Ý»ý ºÐ¼®, ¹Î»ç°í ÇØ¿ÜÇб³Áß ÃÖ°í ¼ºÀû  [1]  BOF 2007/02/13 172 4140
76 University  ÇÕ°Ý °¡´É¼º ³ôÀÌ·Á¸é ¼ºÀû ¿Ü ÀåÁ¡ µå·¯³»¾ß  [3]  BOF 2006/12/11 159 2161
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74 University  ÃÖ±ÙÀÇ ´ëÇÐ ÀÔÇÐ µ¿Çâ  [1]  BOF 2006/11/28 147 1898
73 University  ¾Æ½Ã¾È°è SAT ¸¸Á¡ ¹Þ¾Æµµ ¸í¹®´ë ¸ø°£´Ù?"  [1]  BOF 2006/11/28 178 2424
72 ÀÏ¹Ý  IBT ÅäÇà Áغñ    BOF 2006/11/20 217 1870
71 SAT  SAT 1,2 ÇнÀ¹ý  [1]  BOF 2006/11/20 189 1878
70 University  ÀÚ³àÀÇ ´ëÇÐ ¼±Åà ¾î¶»°Ô µµ¿ï±î?  [2]  BOF 2006/11/17 144 1668
69 University  ¼º°øÀûÀÎ ´ëÇÐ ÀÔÇÐÀ» À§ÇÑ °í±³ Ä¿¸®Å§·³ ½Åû ¿ä·É  [1]  BOF 2006/11/16 149 1721
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66 SAT  SAT ¿¡¼¼ÀÌ, ÀÛ¹®½Ç·Â È¿°úÀûÀ¸·Î ÃøÁ¤ÇÏÁö ¸øÇÑ´Ù  [2]  BOF 2006/11/16 158 1674
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64 University  ÇÁ¸°½ºÅÏ ´ëÇÐ Áö¿ø Á¤º¸  [1]  BOF 2006/11/13 150 2111
63 University  ´ëÇÐ ÀԽÿ¡¼­ °¡Àå Áß¿äÇÑ 10°¡Áö ¸®½ºÆ®  [1]  BOF 2006/11/09 168 1759
62 ÀÏ¹Ý  ºñÆÇÀû µ¶¼­  [2]  BOF 2006/11/09 153 1638
61 University  Àڳฦ ÃÖ°íÀÇ ´ëÇп¡ º¸³»´Â ºñ°á  [1]  BOF 2006/11/09 161 1832
60 HighSchool  ¹Ì±¹ ¼öÇÐ Ä¿¸®Å§·³    BOF 2006/11/09 231 3976
59 HighSchool  ¹Î»ç°í book list    BOF 2006/10/16 194 2208
58 University  ½Å ¸í¹® ¾ÆÀ̺ñ¸®±× (New Elite Ivies) ¶ß°í ÀÖ´Ù    BOF 2006/09/23 165 7137
57 HighSchool  ´©°¡ °Å´ë ³í¼ú ½ÃÀåÀ» ¿òÁ÷À̳ª?    BOF 2006/09/21 228 2914
56 University  Public Ivy¶õ?    BOF 2006/06/29 172 1919
55 HighSchool  2006Ư¸ñ°íÀԽù®¼®-¹Î»ç°í  [1]  BOF 2006/06/21 159 1626
54 University  ´ëÀÔ »çÁ¤°ü µé¿¡°Ô ÁÁÀº ÀλóÀ» ÁÖ·Á¸é?  [1]  BOF 2006/06/14 150 1383
53 ÀÏ¹Ý  ¾ÕÀ¸·Î ÀÚ¸®°¡ ¸¹ÀÌ ´Ã¾î³¯ Á÷Àå¿¡´Â ¾î¶² °ÍµéÀÌ ÀÖ³ª(¹Ì±¹)?    BOF 2006/06/14 174 3364
52 ÀÏ¹Ý  ÃÖ°íÀÇ Á÷¾÷Àº(¹Ì±¹)?    BOF 2006/06/14 135 1516
51 HighSchool  [Áß¾ÓÀϺ¸] °æ±â±Ç ¿Ü°í Çо÷Àû¼º°Ë»ç    BOF 2006/06/13 149 1951
50 HighSchool  [Áß¾ÓÀϺ¸]¿Ü°íÀԽÿ¡¼­ µ¶ÇØÀÇ Á߿伺  [1]  BOF 2006/06/13 135 1223
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47 ÀÏ¹Ý  ¿µ¾î ¸¸Á¡ ºñ¹ý  [1]  BOF 2006/06/03 144 1309
46 ÀÏ¹Ý  ¿µ¾î ¼Óµ¶ 10°è¸í    BOF 2006/06/03 147 1905
45 ÀÏ¹Ý  °´°ü½Ä ½ÃÇè Àß º¸´Â 13°¡Áö ¹æ¹ý  [1]  BOF 2006/06/03 157 1417
44 ÀÏ¹Ý  ±â¸»½ÃÇè ¸¸Á¡ ºñ¹ý  [1]  BOF 2006/06/03 162 1394
43 ÀÏ¹Ý  ½ÃÇè Áغñ ÀßÇÏ´Â ½À°ü  [1]  BOF 2006/06/03 142 1376
42 HighSchool  Èçµé¸®Áö ¾Ê´Â »Ñ¸® '¹Î»ç°í'  [1]  BOF 2006/04/26 150 1478
41 University  ¹Ì±¹ ´ëÇÐ °³¿ä  [1]  BOF 2006/02/24 146 1443
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39 ÀÏ¹Ý  ¿µÀçµéÀÇ °øºÎ ¹æ¹ý  [1]  BOF 2006/01/24 153 1664
38 ÀÏ¹Ý  IBT TOEFL  [1]  BOF 2006/01/13 172 1330
37 University  [³­ ÀÌ·¸°Ô Ú¸ ¸í¹®´ë ÇÕ°ÝÇß´Ù]SAT°¡ ÀüºÎ´Â ¾Æ´Ï¾ß, Ưº°È°µ¿µµ Áß¿äÇØ  [1]  BOF 2006/01/09 124 1301
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34 HighSchool  ¿Ü°í ÀԽà °æÇâ  [1]  BOF 2005/11/18 133 1238
33 ÀÏ¹Ý  ±¹¾î ´É·Â ½ÃÇè    BOF 2005/11/07 164 1467
32 ÀÏ¹Ý  ¿§¼¼ÀÌ Àß ¾²´Â ¹ý  [1]  BOF 2005/10/19 148 1699
31 HighSchool  Çб³ ³í¼ú ½Ã´ë(ÇÏ) - ¿Ü±¹ÀÇ ³í¼ú ±³À°Àº ¾î¶²°¡  [1]  BOF 2005/07/30 139 1440
30 HighSchool  Çб³ ³í¼ú ½Ã´ë(Áß) - Çпø ³í¼ú ±³À°ÀÇ Çã¿Í ½Ç  [1]  BOF 2005/07/29 156 1521
29 HighSchool  Çб³ ³í¼ú ½Ã´ë(»ó) - Çб³¼­ ´õ Àß °¡¸£Ä¥ ¼ö ÀÖ´Ù.    BOF 2005/07/29 159 1526
28 ÀÏ¹Ý  TOEFL essay  [1]  BOF 2005/07/26 139 1519
27 ÀÏ¹Ý  Prepare for TOEFL    ³ëÁø¿ì 2005/07/26 135 1154
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24 ÀÏ¹Ý  Áٱ⠼¼Æ÷ ¿¬±¸ ÇöȲ°ú Àü¸Á  [1]  BOF 2005/07/20 151 1402
23 ÀÏ¹Ý  Áٱ⼼Æ÷¿Í »ý¸íÀ±¸®  [1]  BOF 2005/07/20 142 1675
22 ÀÏ¹Ý  [°æÁ¦°øºÎ ½¬¿ö¿ä ƾƾ°æÁ¦] ÀÎÅÍ³Ý ½Ç¸íÁ¦ ¿Ö ÇÏ·Á°í Çϳª¿ä    BOF 2005/07/18 152 1581
21 ÀÏ¹Ý  ÀÎÅÍ³Ý ½Ç¸íÁ¦ ¿Ö ÇÊ¿äÇѰ¡?  [7]  BOF 2005/07/18 160 1594
20 HighSchool  ¹ÎÁ·»ç°ü°í, ÁßÇмöÇÐ Àü±¹ ¹æ¼Û°­ÀÇ    BOF 2005/07/16 143 1602
19 ÀÏ¹Ý  ¹Ì±¹ÀÇ ¿¡¼¼ÀÌ ¿­Ç³  [1]  BOF 2005/07/13 149 1486
18 University  Á¦ÀÓ½º Á¶ÀÇ ¹Ì±¹ À¯ÇÐ±â  [1]  BOF 2005/07/12 166 1748
17 ÀÏ¹Ý  °øºÎ ÀßÇÏ´Â ¹æ¹ý  [1]  BOF 2005/06/29 141 1665
16 ÀÏ¹Ý  ±¸¼ú ¸éÁ¢ Áغñ  [1]  BOF 2005/06/28 160 1467
15 ÀÏ¹Ý  Àü·«Àû °øºÎ ±â¼ú  [1]  BOF 2005/06/25 143 1628
14 ÀÏ¹Ý  Book list  [1]  BOF 2005/05/21 129 1351
13 ÀÏ¹Ý  ¿µ¾î °øºÎ »çÀÌÆ®  [31]  BOF 2005/04/21 204 4228
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6 ÀÏ¹Ý  ¹Ì±¹ ¸í¹®´ë 10°÷ ÇÕ°ÝÇÑ ¹Ú¿øÈñ´Â ¾î¶»°Ô °øºÎÇßÀ»±î  [1]  BOF 2004/10/18 135 1503
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4 ÀÏ¹Ý  »õ ¿ì¸®¸» ¹Ù·ç±â 62. -- ¹Ì²ô·¯¿î ¹Ì²ô·³  [1]  BOF 2004/10/01 153 1192
3 ÀÏ¹Ý  »õ¿ì¸®¸» ¹Ù·ç±â 61 - 'Ä÷¯'¿Í 'Ä®¶ó'  [1]  BOF 2004/09/30 145 1402
2 ÀÏ¹Ý  »õ ¿ì¸®¸» ¹Ù·ç±â 54. '~µÇ´Ù' ¸¦ ÁÙ¿© ¾²ÀÚ  [1]  BOF 2004/09/16 119 1404
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